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Wankleburr
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Downhill edit triscombe

Postby Wankleburr » Fri Aug 23, 2013 01:23 am

heres and edit i knocked together a while ago wanted some feed back any tips from other film makers

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bK9cnY_gUGo

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Re: Downhill edit triscombe

Postby The Real Radioactiveman » Fri Aug 23, 2013 08:22 am

not a film maker so ignore as appropriate ( I have watched a few though)

Music- made me want to go to sleep

camera mounting- the one where it is on the bars looking down at the forks/front wheel made me feel sick and couldnt see any of the trail.

generally very limited views of the trail and rider at the same time , did you have a chest harness?

- rear facing camera, that looked good and was more interesting as you could see a good view of the trail and rider

length of video- seemed to be lots of duplication of the same trail sections?

Well done, I have never done one so much better than me and fair play for being brave enough to ask for feedback :)
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Wankleburr
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Re: Downhill edit triscombe

Postby Wankleburr » Fri Aug 23, 2013 10:45 am

cheers for feedback i have got a chesty mount. but i think im going to start experimenting off the bike as well . but thanks the feedback any is always better than nothing :)
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Re: Downhill edit triscombe

Postby welshkev » Thu Aug 29, 2013 06:55 am

there's too many sharp cuts in it.

the cuts need to be at more appropriate times going into a similar shot or where there's a natural break to change to something new. the shot of the forks is actually good, but there's too much of it imo.

and +1 for the music :lol:
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Re: Downhill edit triscombe

Postby fredblob » Thu Aug 29, 2013 10:32 am

seen better

your camera angle wasn't very good and the music was dodgy
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